THE VOICE

HARD LIKE A ROCK AND SURROUNDED BY MANY SOLID FRIENDS

اضحى التنائي بديلا من تدانينا

Hi everybody,
One of the most wonderful poems is that Neverland mentioned in the comments is for EBEN ZAIDON not (EBEN 5ALDON),(sorry Neverland).
It's really impressive, from the first words you feel a very big amount of suffering and pain in the heart of the poet which his love is faraway of him.

But I read some thing else, I went deep in it and I found out a profound meaning, and I saw a variety of pictures that couldn’t be  erased from my head.

I read the meaning of being a way of your home, your family, and your friends, being homeless don’t know where and how you will spend your life time, starved and scared under this oppression of Israel army whether in Palestine or in Lebanon.

I couldn’t remove the children pictures from my head...., I will not make it a tragedy but really it’s painful.

I feel this poem is composed for the Arab people these dayes, all what I can say ALLAH E3EN.

Anyway this is the poem I wish u will enjoy it.

 


اضحى التنائي بديلا من تدانينا
وناب عن طيب لقيانا تجافينا
الا وقد حان صبح البين صبحنا
حينا فقام بنا للحين ناعينا
من مبلغ الملبسينا بانتزاحهم
حزنا مع الدهر لا يبلى ويبلينا
ان الزمان الذي مازال يضحكنا
انسا بقربهم قد عاد يبكينا
غيظ العدا من تساقينا الهوى فدعوا
بأن نغص فقال الدهر امينا
فانحل ما كان معقودا بأنفسنا
وانبت ما كان موصولا بايدينا
وقد نكون وما يخشى تفرقنا
فاليوم نحن وما يرجي تلاقينا
ياليت شعري ولم نعتب اعاديكم
هل نال حظا من العتبى اعادينا
لم نعتقد بعدكم الا الوفاء لكم
رأيا ولم نتقلد غيره دينا
ما حقنا ان تقروا عين ذي حسد
بنا ولا ان تسروا كاشحا فينا
كنا نرى اليأس تسلينا عوارضه
وقد يئسنا فما لليأس يغرينا
بنتم وبنا فما ابتلت جوانحنا
شوقا اليكم ولا جفت مآقينا
نكاد حين تناجيكم ضمائرنا
يقضي علينا الاسى لولا تأسينا
حالت لفقدكم ايامنا فغدت
سودا وكانت بكم بيضا ليالينا
اذ جانب العيش طلق من تألفنا
ومربع اللهو صاف من تصافينا
واذ هصرنا فنون الوصل دانية
قطافها فجنينا منه ماشينا
ليسق عهدكم عهد السرور فما
كنتم لارواحنا الا رياحينا
لا تحسبوا نأيكم عنا يغيرنا
ان طالما غير النأي المحبينا
والله ماطلبت اهواؤنا بدلا
منكم ولا انصرفت عنكم امانينا
ياساري البرق غاد القصر واسق به
من كان صرف الهوى والود يسقينا
واسأل هنالك هل عنى تذكرنا
الفا تذكره امسى يعنينا
ويانسيم الصبا بلغ تحيتنا
من لو على البعد حيا كان يحيينا
فهل ارى الدهر يقضينا مساعفه
منه وان لم يكن غبا تقاضينا
ربيب ملك كان الله انشأه
مسكا وقدر انشاء الورى طينا
او صاغه ورقا محضا وتوجه
من ناصع التبر ابداعا وتحسينا
اذا تأود ادته رفاهية
توم العقود وادمته البرى لينا
كانت له الشمس ظئرا في أكلته
بل ما تجلى لها الا احايينا
كأنما اثبتت في صحن وجنته
زهر الكواكب تعويذا وتزيينا

 

Neverland Thank you  again.



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مُبـ ع ـثرهـ from Saudi Arabia
July, 28, 2006 2:20 AM
what i can say !

that is great poem


حقاً ..


للـشعر العربي ملامسة لـ نفسنا , : )
thecaller from Egypt
July, 28, 2006 10:27 AM
asalam 3alaykom,
sob7an allah..that is exactly what i was talking about in my last post..
see how amazing words like these ached my heart and watered my eyes..while in english it made me laugh..although it's not translated or anything..
The arabic language is a treasure laying down waiting for us to pick it up and become rich again.
m.m..really really thank you.
thecaller from Egypt
July, 28, 2006 10:29 AM
hi again..
there isn't one verse that i don't like .but this touched me..
ان الزمان الذي مازال يضحكنا
انسا بقربهم قد عاد يبكينا
غيظ العدا من تساقينا الهوى فدعوا
بأن نغص فقال الدهر امينا
فانحل ما كان معقودا بأنفسنا
وانبت ما كان موصولا بايدينا
M.M from Jordan
July, 28, 2006 11:20 AM
مبعثرهم
you are most welcome, and as you said
للـشعر العربي ملامسة لـ نفسنا
فهو عميق المعنى و ملىء بالأسرار
it's my pleasure to see you again
Bye
M.M from Jordan
July, 28, 2006 11:29 AM
thecaller
thank you, you understand the core of the Arabic language, it's rich more than any other language you can touch the meaning of the words, you can feel every letter there is no even one written arbitrary with out goal of it.
Bye
Neverland from Jordan
July, 28, 2006 12:35 PM

I have his ديوان
so I can't believe that I said that he's 2eben 5aldoon :D HA HA HA HA HA
, That's why the caller cracked up :D

anyways, the best part I love from the poem
بنتم وبنا فما ابتلت جوانحنا
شوقا اليكم ولا جفت مآقينا

It is just amazing...
thecaller from Egypt
July, 28, 2006 2:57 PM
asalam 3alaykom,
hi again..just to say...wowww!!
nice template..mabrook:)
Neverland from Jordan
July, 28, 2006 6:41 PM
I add my voice to caller's :)
It is a nice Template :) and hey, you are welcome to drop by to my blog :)
M.M from Jordan
July, 28, 2006 7:44 PM
Thank you thecaller, thank you Neverland, It's nice you liked it BTW it's my mother taste she selected it.
Neverland from Jordan
July, 28, 2006 7:51 PM
Khusrouf from Jordan
July, 30, 2006 11:21 AM
MAn, ppl love easy things nowadays, thats why less and less people are intersted in arabic leterature, or it's being clouded and blurred by the influence of globalisation, in both cases we're losing...

I really can't deny this poem touched me from it's first phrase, and as u said M.M it fits perfectly to the situation right now..

So until we wake up.. good night everybody
Jerusalem from Jordan
July, 31, 2006 10:37 AM
One thing you can't deny for sure:
Once you get started you won't stop unless you reach the end of the poem,
the most phrase that touched me was:
نكاد حين تناجيكم ضمائرنا
يقضي علينا الأسى لولا تأسينا
Wallah this pictures the famous song أناديكم, I still remember when they used to play it on the radio at the Jenin Refugee Camp Massacre, it felt to me as if people were calling whether dead burried with their houses' stones and rocks or sophicating from underneath ashes. Of course, this applies to all similar incidents that not only touch our hearts, but also leave big scars that would never heal.
Thanks M.M for this lovely enrichment, and thanks to your mom who picked such a piece of art.
Won't take long, but there is one more thing to mention:
I have always believed and still believe that a simple silent BOYCOT, a boycot of a non stopping category, decorated with no complicated slogans and not supported by any expensive fancy propaganda would be a great strategy in the mean time, and as they say: if you cannot buy them weapons to fight with, don't pay for the weapons they will be killed with.
Thanks all, and sorry for taking long but I never get to share such feelings before.